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Editing copywriting - Thames Valley University

Thames Valley University flier edit

As is often the case in editing work, step one was to go back to the client and find out a few basic facts. What's 'too obvious to be worth mentioning' isn't always so obvious to people on the other end. Ignorance may or may not be bliss, but it can be very useful in helping the writer put him or herself in the audience's shoes...
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We are offering you the chance to study an undergraduate degree by part-time study for three and half years* only.

A full-time undergraduate degree usually takes up to three years to complete.

Our part-time intensive degrees offer as much academic content in three and half years than a standard part-time degree.

Why study an intensive part-time degree?
· Lower overall debt at £5,000.
· Study is only six months longer
· You can start work sooner than if you were studying a standard part-time degree
· Earn while you learn – students can work full-time or part-time whilst studying.

Fees and funding
£1500 per year
ELQ students - £2755 per year

Equivalent or lower qualifications (ELQs)
If you already hold a Bachelor's degree for example, but wish to study for a DipHE or HND, you may no longer be entitled to pay the Home / EU fees. Higher fees will be applied instead (the ELQ fee).

The same applies if you wish to study for an equivalent qualification. So for example, if you hold a Bachelor's degree and want to study for another Bachelor's degree, you will have to pay the ELQ fee.
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All the qualification with little or no debt:
Thames Valley University part-time intensive degree

You can still do it
Can’t do a full time degree for some reason? Perhaps the course is full. Or it’s too expensive. Or maybe you can’t face the big debt at the end.

Now there’s an alternative. A part time intensive degree from Thames Valley University. It gives you the same qualification, takes just six months longer than a standard three year undergraduate course, and costs a lot less. And it’s part time. So you can earn while you learn, and end your course with all the degree but little or no debt.

Same academic content, same value to an employer: just the same - for less.

Fees
· Standard - £1500 per year
· ELQ - £2755 per year

The standard fee for the course is £1500 a year. If you already have a degree, you may have to pay a higher fee, called the ELQ – for ‘Equivalent or Lower Qualification’.

If, for example, you already have a BA and your chosen course leads to a BA or a BSc, you will have to pay the higher ELQ fee.


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